Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

News
agencies play
crucial
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role in providing information about the latest events throughout the world. Nowadays, it is widely believed that the main focus of
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media
reports is just disputes and emergencies rather than spreading
news
related to positive improvements
that
is
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not just dangerous for every human being but
also
for
the
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society
. In my opinion, it is a serious issue and
also
has negative impacts on the
society
. First of all, the religious intolerance in different Television shows
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hate among the different communities, which
further
become
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the source of violence in different areas of the
society
.
On the other hand
, development related to
technologies
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technology
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will help
young
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the young
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generation to increase their general knowledge
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will
useful
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to divert their mind from other evil distractions of the world.
For instance
, fight scenes
on
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the
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media
reports can easily attract
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children
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mind
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minds
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because they have the ability to grasp the actions and words very easily.
Secondly
,
media
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the media
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should focus on the positive things rather than
negativity
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the negativity
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of the world. If they will give preference to the development in
the
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society
, it will
also
increase the interest of the young generation in science and technology.
Thus
, they can participate in the growth of
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any
countries
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country
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with the help of their research work in different fields.
For example
, a child who always gives preference to watch
news
related to research work
then
he will become a scientist in the near future. In conclusion, I believe that problems and emergencies reported by the
media
can possibly
cause
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a harmful impact on
the
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society
.
Instead
, the
media
should increase the amount of positive
news
on
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Television to prompt
the
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humanity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pessimistic outlook
  • exposed to negative news
  • stress and anxiety
  • success stories
  • balanced reporting
  • well-informed public
  • rational decisions
  • sense of helplessness
  • apathy
  • skew public perception
  • mistrust in institutions
  • enhance well-being
  • mental health
  • manipulate public opinion
  • serve specific agendas
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