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Writing Samples
Band 6.5

you are going to move to a new company. you want to say goodbye to your colleagues in your present job. write a letter to one of your colleagues. in your letter - give details about the job you are going to do - say when you are going to leave your present job - suggest an idea for a goodbye party write at leate 150 words

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Hi dear Semasu, I am
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 on the edge of my next big step since
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 got the confirmation from the CMS company I dreamed of for years. I am so grateful that I
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 got the confirmation. I will be working as a process development engineer in that firm. It is a dream job for me,
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 am so curious about the details and looking forward to starting work. The next three weeks will be my
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 weeks in TEKNOROT. I am so excited about my new chapter,
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, I am so sad that I will be leaving you and my other dear friends. I don’t even know if
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 will find friends as funny, sincere, and valuable as you over there. I will definitely miss the environment in TEKNOROT. If you like you can throw a party which is like a basic cocktail. Dance, music and maybe some drink and you can name it ‘
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 DANCE’. That’s all for now. With love. BİROL

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coherence and cohesion
Consider using paragraphs to separate different ideas more clearly; for instance, one for your new job, one for your leaving date, and one for the goodbye party suggestion.
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Make sure to double-check spelling and capitalization (e.g., 'i' should be 'I', 'CMS' should be all uppercase).
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You expressed your excitement about the new job very well, which shows your enthusiasm and personal touch in the letter.
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The suggestion of a goodbye party is a nice touch and adds a personal element to your farewell, showcasing your thoughtfulness toward your colleagues.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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