The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average numbers of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The figures give information about average monthly temperatures and total annual hours of sunshine for
London
, New York
, and Sydney. It is noticeable that the temperature
in Sydney has a different pattern to London
and New York
throughout the year.
London
and New York
start and end the year with relatively cold conditions. In January, the recorded temperature
is around 5 degree
in New Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
York
and slightly below 10 degree
in Change to a plural noun
degrees
London
. The temperature
of both cities increased gradually and reached its peak in July, it is around 30 degree
in New Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
York
and approximately 23 degree
in Change to a plural noun
degrees
London
. New York
becomes warmer than London
in mid-year, which is aligned with the fact it receives lot
more sunshine than Correct article usage
a lot
London
.
On the other hand
, Sydney starts and ends the year with higher temperature
. In January, the Fix the agreement mistake
temperatures
temperature
is around 25 degree
and it remained constant until March. Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
Then
it kept falling and hit a low of 15 degree
in July. After that, it rose again and in November reached the same temperatures as January.Change to a plural noun
degrees
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