The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average numbers of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

The figures give information about average monthly temperatures and total annual hours of sunshine for

London

, New

York

, and Sydney. It is noticeable that the

temperature

in Sydney has a different pattern to

London

and New

York

throughout the year.

London

and New

York

start and end the year with relatively cold conditions. In January, the recorded

temperature

is around 5

degree

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in New

York

and slightly below 10

degree

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in

London

. The

temperature

of both cities increased gradually and reached its peak in July, it is around 30

degree

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in New

York

and approximately 23

degree

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in

London

. New

York

becomes warmer than

London

in mid-year, which is aligned with the fact it receives

lot

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more sunshine than

London

.

On the other hand

, Sydney starts and ends the year with higher

temperature

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. In January, the

temperature

is around 25

degree

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and it remained constant until March.

Then

it kept falling and hit a low of 15

degree

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in July. After that, it rose again and in November reached the same temperatures as January.