The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 to 2019.
The first line graph illustrates the evolution of
household
electrical appliance ownership in a country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that all electrical appliances became more popular, in particular
refrigerators and vacuum cleaners.Leading to a significant reduction in the amount of time spent on household
work.
To begin
with,in 1920 washing machines were the most common electrical appliances.Ownership reached 40% of households. However
, in 1980, the washing machine jumped 100%.Almost a third of households owned vacuum cleaners in 1920. But in 2000, the vacuum cleaner soared 100%.Also
refrigerators in 1920 decreased. Add a comma
Also,
nevertheless
, After a few years, its number tripled.However
, ownership increased rapidly and by 1980 there was one in every household
.
noticeable,as families acquired more electrical appliances, the amount of household
work, including cooking, cleaning, and laundry, decreased significantly. The number of hours
spent doing such
work decreased from 50 hours
a week in 1920 to just 20 hours
in 1960 and 10 hours
in 2019.Submitted by marina.parmenova on
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