In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think is postitive or negative situation?
Some
Change preposition
In some
countries
Use synonyms
people
take a Use synonyms
hosuse
for Correct your spelling
house
rent
. Because of Use synonyms
thir
jobs. I am going with taking a Correct your spelling
their
house
Use synonyms
rent
is far better than Use synonyms
owing
a Correct your spelling
owning
house
.
Use synonyms
Coutries
like Correct your spelling
Countries
U.S.A
, Correct article usage
the U.S.A
U.K
and other Correct your spelling
UK
european
Change the capitalization
European
countries
. Most of the Use synonyms
people
should take the Use synonyms
house
for rental. Because of their jobs. Some Use synonyms
people
like students, Use synonyms
employees
Correct word choice
and employees
are come
from different Change to the active voice
come
have come
countries
. So they can not afford to buy a Use synonyms
house
or Use synonyms
owning
Replace the word
own
a
land to build a Remove the article
apply
house
. So they take a Use synonyms
house
for rental. One of the Use synonyms
reason
Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
is
why Unnecessary verb
apply
lot
of Change the article
a lot
people
Use synonyms
take
a Verb problem
buy
house
for Use synonyms
rent
means, Use synonyms
70
% of the Correct word choice
that 70
people
came for work or education from different Use synonyms
countries
or Use synonyms
provision
. They prefer to take a Fix the agreement mistake
provisions
house
for Use synonyms
rent
rather than owning a Use synonyms
house
. Because they Use synonyms
are
not stay in the country for long long years.
Verb problem
do
The another
advantage of Remove the article
Another
rental
a Replace the word
renting
house
is for Use synonyms
bachelors
. If three to five members take a Correct article usage
a bachelors
house
for rental Use synonyms
means
the Verb problem
apply
rent
amount will be reduced for one Use synonyms
indivijual
. other than Correct your spelling
individual
thatt
, the electricity bill, gas bill and water amount Correct your spelling
that
also
reduced. They can share the amount. It Linking Words
reduce
their Change the verb form
reduces
expensses
. There is some default is Correct your spelling
expenses
also
there for renting a Linking Words
house
. A Use synonyms
prson
Correct your spelling
person
take
a Wrong verb form
taking
house
for Use synonyms
rent
means he or she should pay some advance to the Use synonyms
bulding
Correct your spelling
building
owner
or Use synonyms
house
Use synonyms
owner
. The reason is if the Use synonyms
person
Use synonyms
vaccate
the Correct your spelling
vacates
house
means the Use synonyms
owner
Use synonyms
give
some notice Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
to
the to the Change preposition
apply
person
. Use synonyms
According to
the Linking Words
list
the Add a comma
list,
person
Use synonyms
need
to Change the verb form
needs
done
all the things in the Change the verb
do
house
. If the Use synonyms
person
is not willing to do means the Use synonyms
house
Use synonyms
owner
took some in the advance which the Use synonyms
person
was paid.
In conclusion, renting a Use synonyms
house
is far more greater than owning a Use synonyms
hous
. Some default is Correct your spelling
house
also
there for renting a Linking Words
house
. But it is more useful for the students and the Use synonyms
emplyoes
for renting a Correct your spelling
employees
employers
employes
house
.Use synonyms
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