Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are those who believe that hosting an international sports

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is beneficial for the

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,

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others disagree. I agree that hosting an international

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excellent way because it brings

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to the hotel.

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, there is a preparation that

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country

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the country

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has to do

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that

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which

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is to build stadium

facilities

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. The benefit of becoming an international

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sport

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sports

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event

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host

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is many of the accommodation business sectors can increase their profit because every delegation who come from different countries need a hotel during the

event

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, when Indonesia became a

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of

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sport

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sports events

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event

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many hotels were fully booked, and it made their

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grow.

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The government

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,

on the other hand

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, need to prepare all

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for that

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. The Government has to spend a big budget to renovate, and they make sure all infrastructure in the stadium is well organized

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because

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are a prominent aspect of an international

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.

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, the stadium needs many rooms for the athlete to change their clothe and to take a rest, and

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for the audience who come to watch that competition. All countries, in my viewpoint, need to

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international competition because it leads to growth in the economic sector,

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as accommodation.

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, there is a consequence that the government is concerned about how much money, they need to improve

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infrastructure. After the competition events, the

country

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can get positive feedback on their

income

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. In conclusion, the

country

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that wants to be a

host

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of an international

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needs to allocate their money to pay for all activities in that

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.

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, the hosting

country

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of international events,

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as

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sport

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sports

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, will increase their potential

income

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in the accommodation sector during that

event

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.