Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are those who believe that hosting an international sports

event

is beneficial for the

country

,

while

others disagree. I agree that hosting an international

event

excellent way because it brings

income

to the hotel.

However

, there is a preparation that

country

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the country

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has to do

that

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which

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is to build stadium

facilities

. The benefit of becoming an international

sport

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event

host

is many of the accommodation business sectors can increase their profit because every delegation who come from different countries need a hotel during the

event

.

For example

, when Indonesia became a

host

of

sport

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sports events

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event

many hotels were fully booked, and it made their

income

grow.

Government

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The government

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,

on the other hand

, need to prepare all

facilities

for that

event

. The Government has to spend a big budget to renovate, and they make sure all infrastructure in the stadium is well organized

,

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because

facilities

are a prominent aspect of an international

event

.

For instance

, the stadium needs many rooms for the athlete to change their clothe and to take a rest, and

facilities

for the audience who come to watch that competition. All countries, in my viewpoint, need to

host

international competition because it leads to growth in the economic sector,

such

as accommodation.

However

, there is a consequence that the government is concerned about how much money, they need to improve

sport

infrastructure. After the competition events, the

country

can get positive feedback on their

income

. In conclusion, the

country

that wants to be a

host

of an international

event

needs to allocate their money to pay for all activities in that

event

.

Moreover

, the hosting

country

of international events,

such

as

sport

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sports

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, will increase their potential

income

in the accommodation sector during that

event

.