The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
life
stages of the salmon. It can be seen that there are 3 main phases in the Use synonyms
fish
’s Use synonyms
life
cycle.
Starting from eggs in freshwater, these eggs will hatch in about 3 months. After hatching, the baby salmon does not look like a Use synonyms
fish
by any means and is called “alevin” which feasts on its own Use synonyms
yolk-sac
for several weeks. After that, at 5-10 weeks old, it starts to look like a Correct your spelling
yolk sac
fish
and is able to swim. The Use synonyms
fish
is now known as “fry” before developing “finger” markings on its body which make it turn into a “parr”.
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After
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this
stage, the Linking Words
fish
will form a group of “smolts” and head out to the ocean at some point between 1 to 3 years old and spend around 1 to 8 years Use synonyms
there after
being fully developed and Correct your spelling
thereafter
become
a real salmon.
At its final Wrong verb form
becoming
life
phase, the Use synonyms
fish
will go back to the very place where its Use synonyms
life
begins and lay eggs, creating a whole new generation. After spawning, the Use synonyms
fish
’s mission is accomplished and it will die within two weeks.Use synonyms
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