The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the
life
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stages of the salmon. It can be seen that there are 3 main phases in the
fish
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’s
life
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cycle. Starting from eggs in freshwater, these eggs will hatch in about 3 months. After hatching, the baby salmon does not look like a
fish
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by any means and is called “alevin” which feasts on its own
yolk-sac
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for several weeks. After that, at 5-10 weeks old, it starts to look like a
fish
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and is able to swim. The
fish
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is now known as “fry” before developing “finger” markings on its body which make it turn into a “parr”.
After
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stage, the
fish
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will form a group of “smolts” and head out to the ocean at some point between 1 to 3 years old and spend around 1 to 8 years
there after
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being fully developed and
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a real salmon. At its final
life
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phase, the
fish
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will go back to the very place where its
life
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begins and lay eggs, creating a whole new generation. After spawning, the
fish
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’s mission is accomplished and it will die within two weeks.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words life, fish with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • cycle
  • diagram
  • life cycle
  • main features
  • overview
  • stage
  • salmon
  • comparison
  • differences
  • significant
  • summarize
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