The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The

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illustrates

differences

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the differences

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between the

school

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in 1985 and in the present day,

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the number of

students

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in the

school

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. In overview, there are many significant changes appearing on the

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and

students

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increase

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from 1,500

students

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in 1985 to 2,300

students

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now. Considering the

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in 1985, there was a car park

surrounding

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by a

road

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which was

connect

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the

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to the

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entrance and the exit of the

school

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, and

end

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ended

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at the large playing field. There

was

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were

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also

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two classroom blocks beside the

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in the

school

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, which was two-storey

at

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on

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the right side.

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, there was an additional car park beside and a library behind the left classroom.

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, the office was

contact

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in contact

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with the main

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at

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on

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the left side of the

school

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. In the present day, many changes can be seen on the second

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.

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, the

road

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is only

connect

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the

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entrance and the exit, the remaining is cut, and the car park is more round shape than in 1985.

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, some part of the playing fields is replaced by swimming pool, fitness centre and classrooms.

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the classrooms at the right side of the

school

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is

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expanded into two blocks, and the storey is increased to three.

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, the library is changed to

learning

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a learning

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resources centre and computer room. The office is

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unchanged

since 1985.