You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The
map
illustrates
differences
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the differences
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between the
school
in 1985 and in the present day,
along with
the number of
students
in the
school
. In overview, there are many significant changes appearing on the
map
and
students
increase
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have increased
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from 1,500
students
in 1985 to 2,300
students
now. Considering the
map
in 1985, there was a car park
surrounding
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surrounded
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by a
road
which was
connect
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connected
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the
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to the
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entrance and the exit of the
school
, and
end
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ended
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at the large playing field. There
was
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were
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also
two classroom blocks beside the
road
in the
school
, which was two-storey
at
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on
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the right side.
Moreover
, there was an additional car park beside and a library behind the left classroom.
Lastly
, the office was
contact
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in contact
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with the main
road
at
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on
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the left side of the
school
. In the present day, many changes can be seen on the second
map
.
Firstly
, the
road
is only
connect
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connected
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the
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to the
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entrance and the exit, the remaining is cut, and the car park is more round shape than in 1985.
Secondly
, some part of the playing fields is replaced by swimming pool, fitness centre and classrooms.
Next,
the classrooms at the right side of the
school
is
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are
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expanded into two blocks, and the storey is increased to three.
Lastly
, the library is changed to
learning
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a learning
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resources centre and computer room. The office is
unchange
Correct your spelling
unchanged
since 1985.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "lastly".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, school, students, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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