You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

it is widely believed that some

people

want to improve not only their health but

also

the world as a whole by eating no

meat

or

fish

. I totally concur with

this

viewpoint

with

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for

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some

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the

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following reasons. On the one hand, there are various reasons why

people

acknowledged

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acknowledge

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that eating

meat

or

fish

help

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helps

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them in boosting vitamins and minerals which give them a sense of energy.

Therefore

,

meat

or

fish

are

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is

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considered as a "

suplementation

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supplementation

way" for many patients.

As a consequence

,

people

use it as a main

dishes

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dish

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which

provide

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provides

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them

protein

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with protein

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for their health. In scientific research, they figure out various

of

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apply

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microbes in

meat

and

fish

which benefit

for

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apply

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energy and

immune

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the immune

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system.

As a result

,

meat

and

fish

are expected to increase the average life of

human

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humans

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.

On the other hand

, there are several reasons why

i

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I

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support the statement that

people

should eat no

meat

or

fish

.

First,

human

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humans

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can't live longer without vegetables or fruits

by

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because of

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its

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their

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vitamins.

Eventhough

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Even though

meat

and

fish

are high or protein,

it

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they

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includes

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include

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numerous

of

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apply

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paricles leading to

blood

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high blood

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sugar. A diet rich in vegetables and fruits can lower

the

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apply

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blood pressure,

heart

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and heart

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stroke and prevent certain types of cancer.

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, the monk in the temple is

vegetarian

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a vegetarian

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who

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and

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has a long lifespan.

Besides

, if we keep

the

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a

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healthy lifestyle throughout the year, it will play a vital role in reducing the burden of disease for the country. In conclusion,

although

meat

and

fish

are versatile, I am of the opinion that

healthy

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a healthy

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lifestyle by eating no

meat

and

fish

is better because of the decline in disease and the rise in

human's

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human

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lifespan.