Two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day.
The maps illustrate the Denham
town
’s development from 1986 to the present.
Overall
, obviously
the Add a comma
obviously,
town
has a significant changes
. The most noticeable Correct the article-noun agreement
significant changes
a significant change
in
housing, which Add a missing verb
is in
indicate
a higher population.
In 1986, Correct subject-verb agreement
indicates
in
the Change preposition
apply
town
was
fewer Verb problem
had
houses
, but during the next 37 years
the Add a comma
years,
town
witnessed changes. Firstly
, the farmland, which in
east of the River Stoke and in the north-east of the Correct your spelling
is
town
closed. The big area of town
was covered by farmland. Secondly
, there are more houses
along the road.
Also
the shops, which Add a comma
Also,
located
Add a missing verb
were located
in
north of the post office were replaced by Change preposition
apply
houses
. In the town
removed big three gardens and large house
, because Fix the agreement mistake
houses
instead
of them built a Retirement Home. There was primary
school opposite the post office and near to large house and two large Correct article usage
a primary
houses
constructed
in front of the primary school. Add a missing verb
were constructed
Furthermore
, the bridge over the river stoke still stands, as it was.Submitted by dnm.best on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, houses with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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