The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The table illustrates the cost of water in 5 different cities in Australia.

Overall

, the highest bill per household is in Perth, with all other cities being relatively the same price. Melbourne is the exception

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and has the lowest cost of water. Perth is the most expensive city as its total expenditure is 332. Adelaide, Brisbane and

Sydney

have similar numbers of, 312, 310 and 319.

Sydney

, Brisbane and Melbourne have the highest figures for

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up to 125KL, these numbers being respectively, 0.98,0.81 and 0.72.

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, in the category for change over 125KL, it is Perth with the largest figure (1.50).

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followed by Adelaide (1.00),

Sydney

(0.98) and Brisbane ( 0.84). Melbourne is the cheapest city in terms of the cost of water, as the statistic is the same in both columns (0.78). It

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average bill per household, which is 253.

Sydney

also

has constant numbers for up to and over 125KL,

this

being 0.98, but.

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masses

a high total of 319.

Submitted by abeera2012 on Wed Dec 13 2023

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