The maps below show the changes in a school from 1985 to the present time.

The maps below show the changes in a school from 1985 to the present time.
The
map
illustrates how school layouts changed from 1985 to now.
Overall
, the population notably increased after the reconstruction. It is
also
evident that the field size witnessed a dramatic decrease in order to build more classrooms and recreational places. Commence in 1985, the total accommodation was 1500 people. There was a
car
park
located at the bottom of the
map
and the road was on the South
side
of it. In the left-hand corner of the
map
, there was an office, library and a small
car
park
situated and on the East
side
of it placed a 2-storey classroom block. The remaining vacancy at the bottom of the
map
was for the field. Turning to the school layouts after being rebuilt, the population increased by 800 people. The North
car
park
is smaller and the road change to curved in shape. The office remains unchanged, but the library and small
car
park
are demolished to construct a resources centre, which contains a computer room and classrooms appear on the right-hand
side
of it. The classroom block increases by 1 floor and there are newly added classrooms on the South
side
of
classroom
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block.
Moreover
, there are pool and fitness centre in the
South-west
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and the field decline to only the bottom right-hand corner of the
map
.
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