The maps below show the changes in a school from 1985 to the present time.

The maps below show the changes in a school from 1985 to the present time.
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The
map
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illustrates how school layouts changed from 1985 to now.
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, the population notably increased after the reconstruction. It is
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evident that the field size witnessed a dramatic decrease in order to build more classrooms and recreational places. Commence in 1985, the total accommodation was 1500 people. There was a
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park
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located at the bottom of the
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and the road was on the South
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of it. In the left-hand corner of the
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, there was an office, library and a small
car
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park
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situated and on the East
side
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of it placed a 2-storey classroom block. The remaining vacancy at the bottom of the
map
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was for the field. Turning to the school layouts after being rebuilt, the population increased by 800 people. The North
car
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park
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is smaller and the road change to curved in shape. The office remains unchanged, but the library and small
car
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park
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are demolished to construct a resources centre, which contains a computer room and classrooms appear on the right-hand
side
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of it. The classroom block increases by 1 floor and there are newly added classrooms on the South
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of
classroom
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the classroom
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block.
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, there are pool and fitness centre in the
South-west
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and the field decline to only the bottom right-hand corner of the
map
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, car, park, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Layout
  • Significance
  • Accessibility
  • Expansion
  • Facilities
  • Trends
  • Priorities
  • Modernized
  • Well-being
  • Sustainability
  • Transportation
  • Innovative
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