You should write informal letter to your friend.

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Dear Sardor
Sorry
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I didn’t reply sooner. Thanks for your letter. Nowadays I’m very busy with my lessons. It can be seen that recently I will take IELTS certificate. That’s why I should be hard
working
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hard-working
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student. It’s said that
you’re study
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you’re studying
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at Smart Star
academical
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academic
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center
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centre
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. I think Smart Star’s teachers
isn’t
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aren’t
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good and they don’t feel
responsibility
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responsible
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for their students. I recommend MyWay
learning center
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Learning Center
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to you. I’ve been learning English for 2 months there. During the lesson we try to speak only English. Through
this
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this,
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we’re going to improve our Speaking skills. That’s
very
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useful way for us. I’m going to invite you to our group. It has only 9 students. I’ll
wait
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wait for
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you at My Way
learning center
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Learning Center
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. I look forward to your reply. Your
bestfriend
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best friend
, Doniyor
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea, with subsequent sentences logically supporting or expanding on that idea. Use cohesive devices appropriately.
task achievement
Focus on enhancing the friendly tone expected of an informal letter. Use conversational phrases and a warm, personal tone throughout.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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