The chart below shows what Anthropology graduated from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course . The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years .

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduated from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course . The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years .
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of
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Anthropology who
employed
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after finishing their course ,
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the table depicts the income which anthropologists earn after 5 years .
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, the anthropologists who could find full-time work reached
at
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just over half which
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contained the largest segment .
Furthermore
, as we can see in the table , the
anthropology
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who worked for
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earned the most salary after 5 years . As regards to
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chart , the anthropologists who have full-time
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represented 52% ,and
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of part-time workers which had reached the second highest proportion , represented just over
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. The
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segment
is belong
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to part-time work + postgrad study which represented
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5% . We can witness from the table that the sector which gave the highest salary (100,000
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)
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to the government with 50% .
Whereas
one-third of the employees have a salary over 75000 $ . There are similar
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of
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who receive salaries over 25000$ and 50,000$ in both
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and government sectors , which are 5% and 15 % respectively .
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