Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Countries can provide special amenities to their best sportspeople

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them in succeeding in international

sport

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competitions.

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some argue that these sports halls should be accessible to everyone. There are valid opinions on both sides which I will consider and

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give my perspective on the matter. On the one hand, global competitions are the main

arenas

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to bring popularity to countries. In that case,

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support and investment in the development of diverse sports is

accetable

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acceptable

. Providing sportspersons with modern and particular tools is aimed to help them to train in relevant conditions and focus on their workout without any problem.

As well as

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support by

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encourages athletes to concentrate on their achievements by feeling the responsibility of presenting their countries.

On the other hand

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oppenents

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opponents

of

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idea assert that

involving

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in

sport

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activities does not belong to only sportspersons. New and modern

sport

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centers

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and tools should be given to the usage of

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as well.

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factor can increase the passion of other individuals to engage in activities, and most of them will discover their potential to represent their nations in global arenas.

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of these high-level training

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to members of society will decrease the burden of public sports halls. In conclusion, the debate over the

accessibilty

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accessibility

of

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specialised training

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to

public

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exists,

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striking a balance is crucial. I believe that giving access to other people

while

supporting top athletes is beneficial for both sides.