a pie chart and a table show the source and the total value of fish imported to the U.S in 1988, 1992 and 2000

a pie chart and a table show the source and the total value of fish imported to the U.S in 1988, 1992 and 2000
The providers and the general value of fish, which was imported to the U.S between 1988 and 2000,
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shown by pie charts and a table respectively. From
overall
respective it is visible that the total value of
this
industry increased gradually and
Canada
, which was the first most popular source, was mainly replaced by other countries. The total value of fish began at 6.5 billion dollars in 1988 and went up moderately and reached
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10.72 billion dollars in 2000. In terms of pie charts
Canada
was the market leader owning just over
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half of the amount of imported fish in 1988 before decreasing greatly and dropping to 28% by the year 2000 and being replaced by providers from other countries.
Although
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the share of other countries fluctuated slightly from 46% in 1992 to 42% in 2000 it remained the first most favourite provider in 2000. Meanwhile, China, which was about
one fifth
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of
Canada
in 1988, penetrated
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to market and overtook
Canada
over the following decade hitting a peak of 30% of the market share, getting
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second place in 2000.
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