The graph below shows tge sales of children's books,adult fuction and education books between 2002 and 2006.
The bar
start
provide data about 3 different types Change the verb form
starts
books
Change preposition
of books
children
Change noun form
children's
book
adult fiction and educational Correct subject-verb agreement
books
books
Fix the agreement mistake
book
sales
over a 5 year
period starting from 2002 .Add a hyphen
5-year
sales
are measured in million
dollars
.
It can be seen that the amount of children's books
which were sale
showed an upward trend. Replace the word
sold
Whereas
the opposite was true for adult fiction . Educational book sales
showed a fluctuating trend. Looking at the chart in more detail it is evident that 33 million
dollar
in 2002 by 2006 it had significantly increased to 56 Change to a plural noun
dollars
million
dollars
which was the highest point on the graph. The educational book increased from 25 million
dollar
in 2002 to 31 Change to a plural noun
dollars
million
dollar
in 2003. After Change to a plural noun
dollars
that
it Add a comma
that,
shows
Wrong verb form
showed
an
downward trend but again rose to 31 Change the article
a
million
dollars
in 2006.
Turning to the remaining data sets that decreased it can be seen that the sales
of adult fiction books
was
the highest of Change the verb form
were
two
other types of Correct article usage
the two
books
which was 45 million
dollars
.however
Capitalize word
However
this
Correct determiner usage
these
sales
dramatically dropped to 30 million
dollars
in 2006 which was the highest fell of all the sales
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, sales, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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