Individual actions have little or no effect on climate change .For this reason , worthwhile change can only be made at governmental level.To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Not only the media is presenting evidence of
climate
change
. Here in
Hungary
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we can feel the
change
. There are longer and longer time periods without rain mostly in summer, but winter as well.
Finally
, when the rain comes, the quantity of
water
is enormous. So dry seasons and floods are alternating in Hungary. The winters are so much warmer than in my youth,
thus
snow is a rare thing nowadays. Our oleanders are outside all
the
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year. They could not have been there
in
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a few years ago, but now they can be left in the garden
wintertime
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in wintertime
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. The storms are stronger and stronger every year, the wind speed is increasing too. What causes the
climate
change
?
Climate
change
is caused by the warming up of
Earth
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atmosphere. The sun’s
energy
can not leave
Earth
because of the
green house
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greenhouse
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effect. Some of the
gases
of air are absorbing radiation from the sun and preventing the heat to released back
to
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space. These are
water
vapour, CO2, N2O (nitrous oxide), CH4 (methane),
O3
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and O3
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(ozone). What can be done against the
climate
change
? If
Earth
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is warming there
are
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is
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more and more
water
vapour in the air and we cannot prevent it. What we can do is to reduce the quantity of other greenhouse
gases
. Scientist says that carbon emission (80%) and methane (10%) is
a
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main factor. The main sources of them are the burning of fossil fuels, cement manufacture and agriculture. We are burning fossil fuels for
energy
, production of food and goods and transportation mainly. The methane emission is from feed production and the outputs of
gases
during digestion by cows. How can mankind reduce the level of greenhouse
gases
? In my
opinion
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governments alone can not
change
the future, but they can help it in some points. We can reduce our
energy
consumption or we can use clean sources of
energy
like sun, wind or
water
. Governments can aid
this
change
by supporting
the
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individuals to plant sun or wind
powerstations
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power stations
in their houses. We can reduce our food consumption by eliminating
foodwaste
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food waste
. I think governments can help
this
by educating people, but the responsibility is ours. We can reduce our transportation needs by decreasing our travels and the need for transporting food and goods around the world.
This
is the task of individuals to embrace the idea of „enough”. What do I mean by that term? Have only the items you need and not more. Travel only when it is really necessary. Some education can help here too, but people have to understand that their future is bonded to the future of
Earth
, so they must care about her. I do not know the end of
this
story, but I hope there will be a happy ending.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • individual actions
  • governmental level
  • worthwhile change
  • impact
  • large-scale changes
  • set an example
  • policies
  • regulations
  • enforce
  • collaboration
  • renewable energy
  • initiatives
  • environmental regulations
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