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The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007.

The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007.
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The table below shows three statistics about rail transport in 4 countries in the year 2007.
Overall
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, there was a strong positive correlation between the number of people who used rail transport and kilometres travelled per capita. The country with the least number of rail transport users, which is 300 thousand, was Canada.
Moreover
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, its citizens were
also
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 the ones who travelled the shortest distance by
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 method (under 100 kilometres). Malaysia and UAE had similar figures on both quantities: 5.9 and 5.5 million people, who used railways respectively and around 770 kilometres being travelled by the residents of both areas. China had 27 million railway users,
thus
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 having the biggest population in
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 regard. Simultaneously, Chinese citizens moved almost 3 times more, than Malaysians did.
On the other hand
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, the quantity of cargo transported was relatively the same for all the countries.
This
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 amount ranges between 21.9 and 28.2 billion tons and shows absolutely no correlation with the rest of the data in the table.

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