Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious problems and uses up the world's fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traveling

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Travelling

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through

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by

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air

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the air

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is the easiest way

for

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of

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transportation.

People

use

aeroplains

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aeroplanes

, private

jet

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jets

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,

helicopter

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helicopters

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etc.

Although

there are some believe that

travel

through

air

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airways

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ways

bring

lot

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of problems. They are saying that

air

travel

should be restricted

due to

this

and uses up the world's fuel resources. I will completely disagree with

this

statement

firstly

, if we want to

travel

somewhere

that is

too far we must completely depend on the aeroplane

,

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because it goes faster than other transport

ways

or vehicles.There are some

situation

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situations

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in that

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that

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which

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people

feel uncomfortable on

air

transport ,some

people

will vomit

while

travelling in a plane,

although

others have some serious problems that cannot

cure

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be cured

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using medicine, and these

people

can avoid the

air

transpot

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transport

.Talking about

transpot

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transport

,

for example

,travelling

through

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by

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sea

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the sea

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in

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ships or

boat

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boats

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is the worst case

i

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I

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ever come across in my life.

Secondly

, travelling in

an aeroplanes

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an aeroplane

aeroplanes

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, private

jet

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jets

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etc have a complete impact on every

individuals

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individual's

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life. In my opinion,

i

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believe that

people

would not get Suffocation, because

people

are

relaying

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relying

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on safe and comfortable

transpot

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transport

, and the one and only

transpot

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transport

that

gave

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gives

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these quality

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this quality

these qualities

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is

air

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airways

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ways

.

Although

, there are a few having heart problems and some physical

problem

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problems

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they have

an

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the

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opposite impact on

this

.Recently,

i

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I

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had come across a newspaper report about a plain incident.In that newspaper report , one lady with a heart problem was travelling

in

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on

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an indigo flight and

while

in the middle of

travel

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travel,

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she felt a pain in

heart

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her heart

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and there

is

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was

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an

air

hostess she gave some first aid that, the passenger

has

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to survive to the destination. And the amazing part is that the passenger has survived. In conclusion, all the

transpot

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transport

are important in different

ways

.

Mainly travelling

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through

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by

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air

have

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has

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a major role in

this

. Diseased or not they have to

travel

in plain if they seek

safe

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a safe

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and comfortable journey.