There are two-line chart diagrams depict changes that the percent of electrical appliance in households in 1920-2019 and the total time of doing housework every weeks in same time.
The line charts
shows
the Change the verb form
show
comparision
of electrical appliances used and the number of hours Correct your spelling
comparison
working
every week from 1920 to 2019. Over the Wrong verb form
worked
years
, there is
Wrong verb form
has been
drastic
increase in Add an article
a drastic
the drastic
usage
of electronic Correct article usage
the usage
devices
rather than people working at home.
Initially
in 1920, the usage
of electronic devices
such
as washing machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
and Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
vaccum
cleaner has Correct your spelling
vacuum
fourty
, zero, and thirty Correct your spelling
forty
four
percent
respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
While
the Change preposition
Over
years
increased
the use of washing Verb problem
apply
machine
Fix the agreement mistake
machines
is
lesser compared to the other two machines. Verb problem
has
Refrigerator
is the one which has been most used Correct article usage
The refrigerator
since
1940 to 2019 from 52 Change preposition
from
percent
to 100 percent
in 1980 and it has been constant till 2019.
But, Vaccum cleaner has also
a constant increase from 1920 to 1980 from 30 percent
to 90 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
and in 2000 the Change the spelling
per cent
usage
of vaccum
cleaners has been to 100 Correct your spelling
vacuum
percent
and it is constantly increased as Change the spelling
per cent
refrigerator
since Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
then
.
The percentage of using electronic devices
has been
increased over the Unnecessary verb
apply
years
compared to people working in their houses. In 1920, people working at home per week has 50 percent
and as the Change the spelling
per cent
years
increased the hours worked per week has been
reduced to almost 10 Wrong verb form
were
percent
in 2019 and the Change the spelling
per cent
usage
of electronic devices
has risen
.Wrong verb form
rose
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, usage, devices, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.
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