the pie chart below shows the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.
The
given
pie chart illustrates the comparison of the average household investments in a nation in 1950 and 2010.
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Overall
, the major expenditure among all was done in housing in 1950, whilst in 2010, the investment was done in food
category. Other categories Add an article
the food
also
showed some notable changes except education which contributed a minute increase in the
expenditure in 2010.
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While in
1950, housing occupied nearly more than half of the expenditure, Correct word choice
In
then
followed by food with 11.2%, but in 2010, Rephrase
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this
trend got
reversed and Verb problem
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food
category was Correct article usage
the food
at
the highest among all categories with 34%, Change preposition
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then
followed by housing with 22%.
The three categories namely, health care, transportation and others have Rephrase
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been
increased their spending to 4.5%, 14% and 19.2%, respectively. The only portion that showed a little change was education Unnecessary verb
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that got
decreased with a minor difference of around 0.2%.Verb problem
which
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