These days consumers are faced with an increasing amount of advertising from various companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertising? What measures should be taken to protect them?
The advertisement
play
a crucial role in Change the verb form
plays
people
's live
which Replace the word
lives
it
stimulates enormously to buy products even Correct pronoun usage
apply
If does
not Correct your spelling
if they are
requires
. I think consumers are influenced by Wrong verb form
required
advert
and some tackle Fix the agreement mistake
adverts
measure
should be implemented to eliminate Fix the agreement mistake
measures
this
adverse trend. This
essay shall discuss it briefly for the following reasons.
These days, people
can easily manipulated by many companie's
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companies'
ad
in order to Change to a plural noun
ads
they
buy things frequently, and Correct pronoun usage
apply
as a result
, they become a shopaholic. For example
, a
survey done by the Mall in London Change preposition
in a
people
have admitted they purchase products continuously by provoking the companie's
advert. Sometimes the public Correct your spelling
company's
companies
purchase
products Fix the agreement mistake
purchases
which
that they indeed Correct pronoun usage
apply
not
require, even though, they purchased Add a missing verb
do not
dur
Correct your spelling
them
to
they were manipulated by advertisements. Correct word choice
because
This
can lead to affecting the consumer's choice and preference because the companies are decided
what product the individual should Wrong verb form
decide
be bought
unlikely the Verb problem
buy
consumer's
.
There are some Change noun form
consumer
measure
Fix the agreement mistake
measures
should
be implemented to avoid Correct pronoun usage
that should
this
situation. The authority should check whether the company ad
can be influenced or not before airing it, and as a result
, the public will not influence
. Wrong verb form
be influenced
For instance
, in Asian Fix the agreement mistake
countries
country
some local Add a comma
country,
authority
check Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
enterprise's
adverts that Fix the agreement mistake
enterprises'
are stimulated
Wrong verb form
stimulate
of
Change preposition
apply
people
buying behaviour in order to they can Change noun form
people's
condemned
some Change the verb form
condemn
enterprise's
goods. Indeed the Fix the agreement mistake
enterprises'
ad
should be natural and unbiased.
To conclude
, indeed the
individuals are influenced by the company's advertisement. The government should investigate before airing Correct article usage
apply
advertisement
and the Correct article usage
an advertisement
ad
should be unbiased and natural. Therefore
, I think consumers are influenced drastically by the ad
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