The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island betwen 2010 and 2017.

The given graph illustrates how many tourists visited a part of the Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.

Overall

, it can clearly be seen that the trend increased in all aspects during the time period.

While

the total number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island dominated in all years, visitors staying on cruise ships were the lowest at the beginning. In terms of the number of visitors, it was dominated with the total of tourists in 2010 stood at exactly 1

million

and rose significantly to about 2.5

million

before hitting a trough total of 3.5

million

in the final year. Regarding the type of stay, the visitors who stayed on the island started at about 0.75

million

, compared to those staying on ships with a minimum of 0.25

million

. The number

then

inclined to 1.5

million

in 2013 and stayed constant three years later before it was replaced by others that saw a dramatic growth to exactly 1.5

million

in 2016 and climbed by 5

million

in the

last

period

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4Linking words
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