The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014.
The line graph depicts the
amount
of Use synonyms
sales
of three different items (bread, buns, and pies) bought in a particular bakery in one period (2014).
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Overall
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it is clear that
both bread and bun products Linking Words
sales
experienced a fluctuation, Use synonyms
while
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amount
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sales
of the pies increased gradually during the period.
To delve into more details, the number profit-making of bread started at 80,000 dollars in January, and it Use synonyms
then
plunged to under $ 50,000 in March. From Linking Words
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figure witnessed some fluctuations in the following months, increasing to $60,000 in April and falling down to just $40,000 before reaching a peak at almost $70,000 in June. It Linking Words
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inclined to around $45.000 in September afterwards It rose significantly to go back to $80,000 by December. In terms of buns Linking Words
sales
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figure had an upward trend, rising from just $40.000 to exactly %70,000. Unfortunately, the Linking Words
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this
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then
decreased drastically to just $30,000 Linking Words
at the end
of the year.
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, the rate of pies Linking Words
sales
underwent an increase during the times, which accounted for only $10,000 in the first month. It Use synonyms
then
grew gradually to $20,000 in August, and Linking Words
this
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amount
remained stable for three months before reaching a peak of $40,000 in December.Use synonyms
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