The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014.
The line graph depicts the
amount
of sales
of three different items (bread, buns, and pies) bought in a particular bakery in one period (2014).
Overall
, it is clear that
both bread and bun products sales
experienced a fluctuation, while
the amount
sales
of the pies increased gradually during the period.
To delve into more details, the number profit-making of bread started at 80,000 dollars in January, and it then
plunged to under $ 50,000 in March. From then
on, this
figure witnessed some fluctuations in the following months, increasing to $60,000 in April and falling down to just $40,000 before reaching a peak at almost $70,000 in June. It then
inclined to around $45.000 in September afterwards It rose significantly to go back to $80,000 by December. In terms of buns sales
, from January to August this
figure had an upward trend, rising from just $40.000 to exactly %70,000. Unfortunately, the amount
profitable of this
then
decreased drastically to just $30,000 at the end
of the year.
However
, the rate of pies sales
underwent an increase during the times, which accounted for only $10,000 in the first month. It then
grew gradually to $20,000 in August, and this
amount
remained stable for three months before reaching a peak of $40,000 in December.Submitted by musa.nuwa on
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