the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number oof new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line chart illustrates the trend of
shop
closures and openings in a country within eight years
.
In 2011, about 8500 new stores were opened but just one year later in 2012, it was reduced to nearly half with the figure standing at 4000. Two years
later, the opening rate saw an increase, but it again fell to 4000 and continued to become steady in upcoming years
. It is clear from the chart that in 2014, there was a balance between openings and closures.
Shop
owners tended to terminate their existing businesses, rather than start new ones, except for the years
2011 and 2015. Before 2014, the number of people who wanted to close their shops,
was between 6000 to 7000, Remove the comma
apply
then
it dropped suddenly to less than 1000 in 2015, but only one year later, it returned to the usual trend standing at about 5000.
Overall
, There was a high demand for shop
openings in 2011, while
there was a drop in shop
closures in 2015.Submitted by ziba.gharehnazifam on
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