The pie charts below show the percentage of five types of food sold by a supermarket in 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the percentage of five types of food sold by a supermarket in 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The percentage of five kinds of food that are sold by a supermarket in different years
are
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illustrated in the pie charts.
Overall
, The vegetables and
the
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meat
are
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the
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total 46 and 48
percent
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, respectively, almost
a
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half of the pie in both years. In 2013, the seafood and fruits increased marginally compared to 2003.
In addition
, the eggs had the
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percentage in 2013. To look at the data in more detail, the vegetables had the largest amount, one four in 2003, yet it decreased to 23% in 2013. The second most popular food sold by a supermarket was meat in 2003, it was 21%.
However
, it climbed to 25%, surpassing the vegetables in 2013.
On the other hand
, the amount of seafood and eggs
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almost the same in 2003, 19% and 20% respectively, and the fruits were the less popular products in 2003.
However
, they had changed their ranking in 2013. The seafood and
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fruits had a slight increase, the percentage of eggs declined 6 %, to 14%, becoming the less popular product.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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