The pie charts below show the percentage of five types of food sold by a supermarket in 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The percentage of five kinds of food that are sold by a supermarket in different years
are
illustrated in the pie charts. Change the verb form
is
Overall
, The vegetables and the
meat Correct article usage
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are
Unnecessary verb
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the
total 46 and 48 Correct article usage
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percent
, respectively, almost Change the spelling
per cent
a
half of the pie in both years. In 2013, the seafood and fruits increased marginally compared to 2003. Correct article usage
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In addition
, the eggs had the less
percentage in 2013.
To look at the data in more detail, the vegetables had the largest amount, one four in 2003, yet it decreased to 23% in 2013. The second most popular food sold by a supermarket was meat in 2003, it was 21%. Correct your spelling
lowest
However
, it climbed to 25%, surpassing the vegetables in 2013.
On the other hand
, the amount of seafood and eggs were
almost the same in 2003, 19% and 20% respectively, and the fruits were the less popular products in 2003. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
However
, they had changed their ranking in 2013. The seafood and the
fruits had a slight increase, the percentage of eggs declined 6 %, to 14%, becoming the less popular product.Correct article usage
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