The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it is distributed.

The diagram and table represent accumulated data on the police budget in 2017 and 2018 in Britain . The pie charts depict the contribution of the

money

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, and the table illustrates the

sources

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of

money

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.

Overall

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, the major source of the

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is from

national

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the national

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government in both years. The amount of

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received from all the

sources

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increases,

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the total to rise. The majority of the budget is spent on salaries of the police.

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, the

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is

also

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spent on technology but in a small amount. There were 3

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of

money

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: national government, local taxes, and other

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.

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, it is noticeable that the majority of the

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came from

national

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the national

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government,

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for 175.5

million

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pounds in 2017.

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,

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number increased to 177.8

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pounds in the year later. The police

also

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got more

money

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from local taxes and other

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, leading to

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increase in total from 304.7

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to 318.6

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in the

last

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reported year. Third of the quarter of the

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was spent on salaries,

accounted

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for 75 per cent.

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the climb

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amount

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the amount

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of

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spending

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on technology, the proportion of the budget for the salary has been decreased to 69 per cent. Interestingly, the percentage of the contribution of

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for buildings and

transportations

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transportation

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remained unchanged at precisely 17 per cent.