Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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claim travelling or working in another
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, are the
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to obtain foreign
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While some
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other
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that learning a new
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various
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rather
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than vacation or business purposes. In
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essay, I discuss both views and
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represent my viewpoint. For
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who plan to travel and work in another
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, learning
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language
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is believed as an essential element.
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with, visiting
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another
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believed as a chance for tourists to explore the local
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. In order to achieve easy communication with local citizens of those regions,
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should know and
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a second
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.
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, families in Indonesia take some Chinese
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to get better conversation when buying souvenirs at traditional markets in China.
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, being fluent in another
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will ease the recruitment process for workers to be accepted at
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company in
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country
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, every single year Singapore hires a thousand
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from Indonesia to work
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this
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country
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but one of the work specifications is fluency in English.
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,
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and working overseas are not the only
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why
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should study a new
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. One of the other
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is schooling, since some states provide suitable
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for pursuing higher education.
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, some students in Indonesia who want to study abroad must pass that
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certification from those regions to achieve their goals
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the
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other
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country
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, some books for students are not provided with translation.
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, the easiest way to understand
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books is by studying
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language
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. In conclusion, I believe there are many
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why
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need
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a foreign
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, including travelling, working and studying. The final point, a new
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is the best way to connect
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over
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the world.
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