The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams show West
Park
Use synonyms
School
at three different stages in its development:1950, 1980 and 2010.
In 1950, the Use synonyms
school
was built close to the main road and next to a number of houses. A large area behind the Use synonyms
school
was turned into a Use synonyms
playground
, Use synonyms
while
the area behind the houses was farmland.
By 1980, the houses had been demolished in order to make way for a small car Linking Words
park
and an additional Use synonyms
school
building, which became the science block. Use synonyms
In addition
to the existing Linking Words
playground
, the Use synonyms
school
Use synonyms
also
gained the farmland and converted it into a sports field.
In 2010, the Linking Words
school
building remained unchanged but the car Use synonyms
park
was extended to cover the entire sports field. Use synonyms
As a result
of Linking Words
this
, the original Linking Words
playground
was divided into two so that it provided a smaller Use synonyms
playground
and a small sports field.
During Use synonyms
this
period, the Linking Words
school
has increased in size and a car Use synonyms
park
has been created and enlarged. The combined recreational areas, Use synonyms
however
, first expanded and were Linking Words
then
reduced in size.Linking Words
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, school, playground with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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