The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams show West
Park
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School
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at three different stages in its development:1950, 1980 and 2010. In 1950, the
school
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was built close to the main road and next to a number of houses. A large area behind the
school
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was turned into a
playground
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,
while
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the area behind the houses was farmland. By 1980, the houses had been demolished in order to make way for a small car
park
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and an additional
school
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building, which became the science block.
In addition
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to the existing
playground
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, the
school
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also
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gained the farmland and converted it into a sports field. In 2010, the
school
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building remained unchanged but the car
park
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was extended to cover the entire sports field.
As a result
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of
this
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, the original
playground
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was divided into two so that it provided a smaller
playground
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and a small sports field. During
this
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period, the
school
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has increased in size and a car
park
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has been created and enlarged. The combined recreational areas,
however
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, first expanded and were
then
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reduced in size.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words park, school, playground with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • renovation
  • expansion
  • modernization
  • infrastructure
  • landscape
  • facade
  • demolition
  • construction
  • alteration
  • amenities
  • accessibility
  • sustainability
  • curriculum
  • enrollment
  • pedagogy
  • architecture
  • commute
  • heritage preservation
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