The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.write at least 150 words

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.write at least 150 words
The diagrams show West
Park
School
at three different stages in its development:1950, 1980 and 2010. In 1950, the
school
was built close to the main road and next to a number of houses. A large area behind the
school
was turned into a
playground
,
while
the area behind the houses was farmland. By 1980, the houses had been demolished in order to make way for a small car
park
and an additional
school
building, which became the science block.
In addition
to the existing
playground
, the
school
also
gained the farmland and converted it into a sports field. In 2010, the
school
building remained unchanged but the car
park
was extended to cover the entire sports field.
As a result
of
this
, the original
playground
was divided into two so that it provided a smaller
playground
and a small sports field. During
this
period, the
school
has increased in size and a car
park
has been created and enlarged. The combined recreational areas,
however
, first expanded and were
then
reduced in size.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words park, school, playground with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • renovation
  • expansion
  • modernization
  • infrastructure
  • landscape
  • facade
  • demolition
  • construction
  • alteration
  • amenities
  • accessibility
  • sustainability
  • curriculum
  • enrollment
  • pedagogy
  • architecture
  • commute
  • heritage preservation
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