Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are a lot of individuals who strongly think that social media platforms,

for example

(Facebook), have contributed to massive disadvantages among citizens and communities. I deeply support

this

opinion, and

this

essay will explain practical reasons for

this

negative effect.

Firstly

, online web pages contribute to cumulative feelings that are mostly negative and toxic. As the internet has invaded our lives, it is really hard to separate our feelings, emotions and actions from the online materials we are exposed to, and we are usually witnessing grief news, bad updates and tragic actions.

Accordingly

,

this

will affect each person

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worsen his or her

feeling

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feelings

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, and decrease the optimism.

Second,

social media platforms do not facilitate the essence of social interaction and

thus

lead to an isolated community. Despite the fact that the main aim of networking is to bring people together, these days, the dependency and addiction

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the

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easy dopamine stimulators have massively reduced the time spent with real people.

For example

, a teenager now would prefer to spend his or her weekend scrolling

among

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short videos on Instagram

instead

of hanging out with his or her peers.

Consequently

,

this

drops the

overall

society

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achievement and development. In conclusion,

while

some people don’t state the negative consequences behind modern social applications, many others believe that

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limits

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the community’s improvements and primarily

affects

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the individual’s well-being. In my view,

it is clear that

we are feeling the harmful results behind these applications in our everyday

life

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lives

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, and everyone should agree on that fact.