Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the less of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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focused to

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by people in our

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including

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decrased

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decreased

significantly

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population of special

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plant

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plants

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or animals.

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, some people argue that not

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a priority

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to solve

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the

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another big issues

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as

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change

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or a new virus.

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essay will discuss both

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view

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.

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,

the

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environtment

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environmental

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problem

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problems

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can

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by many factors, one of the most vital

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problem

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problems

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is losing a significant number of

spesific

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specific

flora and fauna. The

food

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chain will be

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as a impact of

disappear

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the disappearance of

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that creatures

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that creature

those creatures

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.

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, the population of

snack

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snacks

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declined massively in four

decade

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and the number of

rat

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has grown significantly.

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, the rat will

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rapidly outside

to

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our houses. If a

partucular

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particular

plant

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slump

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slumps

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that will be impacted

for

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apply

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animal

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animals

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because

that is

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a

food

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source for them.

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, if

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grass

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vanishes

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then

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the Elephant, the Deer or the others lose

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primary

food

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.

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, In a long time they

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will be died. Even though, the

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with less number of flora and fauna are the primary issues. The issue

about

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of

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climate

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change

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is the most important. Because

climate

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change

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not only

effect

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affect

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to our

live

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lives

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but

also

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for

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animal

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animals

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or

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and

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plant

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plants

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too.

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Climate

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climate

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change

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will

rise

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raise

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the

world

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temparature

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temperature

,

then

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in

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the long-term

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long-term

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will make our

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hoter

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hotter

other

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than before. The effect of high temperature can be worts for us,

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as the massive

plant

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,

animal

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animals

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or

human

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humans

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will

died

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because of the

hotest

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temperature.

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, the peak temperature of

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world

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the world

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will impact

drammatically

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dramatically

decreased

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decrease

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our source of

food

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and water.

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, we will be starved and

weaked

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weak

without

eat

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and

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drinking

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. In conclusion, the

problem

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about

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of

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a minimal population of

spesific

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specific

flora and fauna

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that

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apply

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is

a

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an

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important thing for us to solve

it

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apply

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.

Personaly

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,

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believe that

the

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climate

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change

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is

priority

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to figure out a solution because not only effect to

human

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humans

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but

also

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for

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apply

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all

organism

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organisms

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in the

world

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.