The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured
The diagram illustrates the way in which cup noodles are produced.
Overall
, there are eight stages in the making of noodles, starting with filling flour to the silo storages and culminating in labelling and sealing cups as the packaging.
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process, the flour will be pumped by a truck to the silos before being put into a mixing machine alongside the combination of water and oil. Linking Words
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stage, the resulting mixture is rolled over by the conveyor to create a dough sheet and goes through a cutting machine to be separated into even strips.
Moving to the next stages, the dough strips are moulded into noodle discs Linking Words
subsequently
fried with oil and left to dry. Linking Words
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, the dried noodle discs, Linking Words
together with
vegetables and spices are put into are packaged in cups. In the final of Linking Words
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process, these cups are labelled and sealed.Linking Words
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