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The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.

The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.
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The line graph illustrates
change
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the change
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amonth
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a month
amount
 of fish,
salt
, and meat consumed per person and per
week
 in China from 1985 to 2010. All in all, the
consumption
 of fish was
most
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the most
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 popular item among Chinese people from the given three items.
Acoordind
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According
 to the graph, in 1985, the
consumption
 of fish
is
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was
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 the highest
intakes
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intake
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 from people in China at 600 grams.
Then
,
seem
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it seemed
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 to fluctuate
at
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in
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 1990
reach to
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reaching
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 700
gram
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grams
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 per
week
, after it
decerae
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decrease
decreased
 to 600
gram
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grams
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 by the year 1995
However
, fifteen years later, it rose significantly to approximately 850
gram
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grams
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 per
week
 in 2010.
In contrast
, the
amonth
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amount
 of
salt
 indicates nearly 500
gram
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grams
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 per
week
. After which it dramatically declined to 200 grams, in 2010.
In addition
, the
consumption
 of meat,
while
 at a relatively low level, rose significantly during
this
 period. By 2010 it was at the same level as the
consumption
 of
salt
. By 2010 it was at the same level as the
consumption
 of
salt
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salt, week, consumption, gram with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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