The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016

The graph illustrates the quantity of four clinics in a hospital during a period of 6 years which started in 2010

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from the graph the

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of

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four clinics in one hospital birth control. In 2010 the

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of sick

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on birth control accounted for about 249 but in 2012 approximately 270, the

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gradually rose from 2014 to 2016, before falling slightly in the following year

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in eye clinics sick

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between 2010 and 2012 remained stable

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quickly rose until 2016 The

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between 2010 and 2012

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gradual

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until 2014

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unchanged and reached

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peak of about 170

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in 2016. In additional

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of dental problems steadily decreased between 2010 and 2012 the

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remained stable from 2014 to 2016 before increasing significantly