The chart shows the percentage of land in four countries that was covered by forest between 1600 and 2000.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of land covered by
forest
in four countries from 1600 to 2000. Overall
, while
the US and the the
UK experienced a downward trend, Remove the redundancy
apply
Scotland
and France
showed an upward trend, with Scotland
exhibiting the highest progression over 400 years.
To begin
with, between 1600 to 1800, initially
, the area that
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covered
by Add a missing verb
was covered
forest
in the UK was the highest percentages
compared to other countries, about 49%. After which, it dwindled gradually Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
approximately
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to approximately
at
36% in 1800. Change preposition
apply
Similarly
to France
and England's trend, they witnessed a moderate decrease about
15% and 5%, respectively, Change preposition
of about
while
the covered forest
in Scotland
increase
slightly and surpassed England in 1800, accounting for 6%.
In the period of 1850 to 2000, after decreasing considerably around 35%, a small number of covered land Wrong verb form
increased
were
increased and remained unchanged Unnecessary verb
apply
in
the end of the period. Change the preposition
at
However
, France
and Scotland
showed a significant incrase
, with Correct your spelling
increase
France
's were
the highest change. Wrong verb form
being
In contrast
, England
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England's
forest
expansion remained unchanged at
the range of 5% to 10%Change preposition
in
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Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, scotland, france with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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