The maps show the town of Harbourville in 1950 and 2020.

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Harbourvile

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improvement and development from 1950 to 2020.

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, it was apparent that there was a significant change in

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for over 70 years, with many houses and public facilities

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built around the

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western

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, There was no improvement

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Eastern

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of Harbourville.

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with, it was apparent that 7 new

place

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for residents was built on the northern of

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in 2020.

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the middle of the town,

forest

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was demolished and reconstructed to be a park. In 2020, the Murphy's Landing Mariana

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changed into

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History Museum. The West Shore Mariana, which adjacent to

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History Museum, was remained

unchange

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unchanged

. On the southern of

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, In 2020,

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half of

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, which

located

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near Harbour Road, was removed and changed into two houses.

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, to the south of the city, Fish Market proliferated from one store

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3 stores in 2020.

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The maps show the town of Harbourville in 1950 and 2020.

Some people say that the academic success of students depends on the quality of their teachers. Others think it depends on the personal commitment and attitude of the students. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality high school students should be encouraged to question and offer criticism on their teachers. Others think this will you lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that governments should have access to people’s mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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