The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: • Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear
sir
/Capitalize word
Sir
madam
,
I am writing Capitalize word
Madam
this
missive in regards to the ineffcient
waste collection system of my region causing several issues to the residents.
To commence with,Correct your spelling
inefficient
insufficient
grabage
day as per council's decision must be gathered by Monday every week. Correct your spelling
garbage
This
, however
, is usually delayed by the employees when they finish this
job in late evenings which leads to a great disturbance and noise to the locals since they cannot relax after returing
tired from their jobs . Correct your spelling
returning
And sometimes
, it is even done the following day Correct word choice
Sometimes
instead
of Monday which is quite annoying. Another significant issue is that quite often rubbish is left in the bins and sometimes the workers simply skip bins to be emptied; consequently
Add a comma
consequently,
hives
Correct your spelling
gives
brirth
to diseases Correct your spelling
birth
due to
the organic garbage being indisposed.
I and my neighbours have suffered these troubles a number of times. Possible solutions can be proper tarining
provided to the workers and timely supervision should be conducted to ensure the complete compliance of job duties to prevent citizens Correct your spelling
training
suffering
from any troubles and illnesses these may cause.
We expect you to look into the matter and take Change preposition
from suffering
a
prompt action.
Yours faithfully,
RajniRemove the article
apply
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coherence cohesion
To improve the logical structure, ensure that your paragraphs follow a clear progression of ideas from introducing the problem to providing suggestions.
coherence cohesion
Regarding greeting and closing, using 'Dear Sir or Madam,' and 'Yours faithfully,' is appropriate, but ensure the sign-off aligns with the name used if the name is known.
coherence cohesion
Introduce only one main idea or argument per paragraph to enhance readability and organization.
task achievement
For a complete response, detailed descriptions and explanations for all points are necessary. Expand on how the rubbish collection system is affecting the community and provide more detailed suggestions.
task achievement
You have maintained a suitable formal writing tone throughout the letter, which is good for the task at hand.