The line graph illustrates three different kinds of crimes that occurred in Newport City center between 2003 and 2012.

The line graph illustrates three different kinds of crimes that occurred in Newport City center between 2003 and 2012.
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The line graph shows three distinct types of crimes that happened in Newport city
center
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from 2003 to 2012
overall
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, it was clear that only
robbery
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faced a slight change as compared to other crimes.
To begin
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, In 2003 the highest rate of crimes was done
is
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which is Burglary 3500 and the lowest crime was done is
Robbery
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500. After that Burglary kept on decreasing and in 2008 it was about 1200
incidents
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but
Robbery
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slightly increased in the
year
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2005 to 800
incidents
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. The number of
incidents
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of Burglary again started rising in 2009 which was about 1200 and
then
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showed fluctuation till the
last
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year
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2012. In 2006 the number of
incidents
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of
Robbery
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showed a slight stability and in the latter,
year
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it was about 600. Looking forward the number of
incidents
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of car theft was 2600 in the initial
year
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which shows a great fluctuation every
year
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and in the
last
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year
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it decreased to 2400.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words robbery, incidents, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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