The line graph illustrates three different kinds of crimes that occurred in Newport City center between 2003 and 2012.

The line graph illustrates three different kinds of crimes that occurred in Newport City center between 2003 and 2012.
The line graph shows three distinct types of crimes that happened in Newport city
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from 2003 to 2012
overall
, it was clear that only
robbery
faced a slight change as compared to other crimes.
To begin
, In 2003 the highest rate of crimes was done
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which is Burglary 3500 and the lowest crime was done is
Robbery
500. After that Burglary kept on decreasing and in 2008 it was about 1200
incidents
but
Robbery
slightly increased in the
year
2005 to 800
incidents
. The number of
incidents
of Burglary again started rising in 2009 which was about 1200 and
then
showed fluctuation till the
last
year
2012. In 2006 the number of
incidents
of
Robbery
showed a slight stability and in the latter,
year
it was about 600. Looking forward the number of
incidents
of car theft was 2600 in the initial
year
which shows a great fluctuation every
year
and in the
last
year
it decreased to 2400.
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