The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram depicts the way in which
bricks
are produced so as to be used for industrial purposes.
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Overall
, it is clearly observable that Linking Words
this
process consists of seven distinct steps, commencing with digging and culminating with transferring products to the industry sectors.
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To begin
with, a digger is utilized in order to collect clay, which acts as a raw material in Linking Words
this
procedure. Afterwards, the collected clay goes through the next step, where a metal grid, Linking Words
as well as
a roller, Linking Words
as well as
a roller, are employed to separate bigger particles from the fine ones that are used in the following phases. In the subsequent stage, sand and water should be added to the clay, and Linking Words
then
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this
mixture either undergoes a moulding process or goes through a cutting step. Linking Words
Next,
the Linking Words
bricks
are held in an oven for 24-48 hours, making drying possible. Once Use synonyms
this
has been done, two separate heat treatments are carried out: the first one in the temperature range of 200–980 °C and the second one at a relatively higher temperature (870–1300 °C). Linking Words
Subsequently
, Linking Words
bricks
are kept in a chamber, providing sufficient time (48–72 hours) for the cooling process. In the two final stages, manufactured Use synonyms
bricks
are packed and delivered to the building industry by trucks.Use synonyms
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