The maps give information about the developments which took place in the island.
The map illustrates the changes and developments made in Paradise
Island
.
Overall
, there are numerous changes that differ Paradise Island
from its past, these changes took place mainly in the central area
of the island
.
As seen from the map, several alternations are conducted within the island
. First of all, a swimming pool and a hotel area
are added to replace the scientific research station. This
indicates the shift to tourism activities from Paradise Island
as opposed to the past with the presence of a research station. Second,
the island
also
opened new eating areas, including the BBQ area
and the main restaurant. Both of these eating services are located at the centre of the island
. On the left side of the island
, a cafe is added additionally
to the natural spring from the past.
On the other hand
, there are also
several developments within the outside areas of the island
. There is a scenic lookout location on the left side of the island
to allow tourists to have a view of the beautiful scenery. Furthermore
, a swimming permitted area
is added to the beach as opposed to the past and the boat is renovated to a cruise ship.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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