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The maps show two different plans designed for a conference room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show two different plans designed for a conference room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram makes a comparison between two different plans designed for a
conference
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room
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Overall
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, there are several differences in the design of the position of equipment in the
conference
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room
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 between
Plan
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 A and
Plan
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 B. A deep analysis of the
plan
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 provided reveals in
Plan
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 A a morning tea is designed in the south of the
conference
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room
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. In the middle
room
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, there are two tables with three seats per table set opposite and a table with four seats set opposite with a whiteboard in the north of the
room
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, the podium is set on the next whiteboard in the northwest of the
room
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. It is noticeable that in
plan
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 B, the morning tea is designed in the northwest of the
conference
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room
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.
On the other hand
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, there are three tables with six seats per table a podium is designed circle and a whiteboard is set above the podium.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words conference, room, plan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rectangular
  • intimate
  • focused setting
  • versatile
  • collaborative work
  • whiteboard
  • projector
  • amenities
  • refreshment area
  • storage cabinets
  • breakout areas
  • dividers
  • group discussions
  • interactive sessions
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