The diagram below shows some design principles for an energy-efficient house and how they work in different climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows some design principles for an energy-efficient house and how they work in different climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram demonstrates the main features of a
house
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to compare the functionality in warm
weather
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and cold
weather
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.
Overall
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, there are several similarities and differences between how the
house
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function in opposing climates. As seen from the diagram, during cool climates, the walls of the
house
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are covered with insulation to store
heat
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within the
house
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.
As a result
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of
this
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, it allows customers to feel warm during cold
weather
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. The roof is
also
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built with thermal building materials to store the warmth inside the
house
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.
On the other hand
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, during the warm
weather
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, the roof is expanded to create more shaded areas.
Along with
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the reflective roof material, insulations are reflected back to the outside environment, preventing additional
heat
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from entering the
house
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. At night time, ventilations are used to remove stored
heat
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along with
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the opening of windows. Respectively,
heat
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is able to leave the
house
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, allowing the customer to be surrounded by a cooler environment despite the warm climate.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "along with".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words house, weather, heat with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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