Writing Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows some design principles for an energy-efficient house and how they work in different climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram demonstrates the main features of a
house
to compare the functionality in warm weather
and cold weather
.
Overall
, there are several similarities and differences between how the house
function in opposing climates.
As seen from the diagram, during cool climates, the walls of the house
are covered with insulation to store heat
within the house
. As a result
of this
, it allows customers to feel warm during cold weather
. The roof is also
built with thermal building materials to store the warmth inside the house
.
On the other hand
, during the warm weather
, the roof is expanded to create more shaded areas. Along with
the reflective roof material, insulations are reflected back to the outside environment, preventing additional heat
from entering the house
. At night time, ventilations are used to remove stored heat
along with
the opening of windows. Respectively, heat
is able to leave the house
, allowing the customer to be surrounded by a cooler environment despite the warm climate.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "along with".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words house, weather, heat with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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