The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph illustrates on average
carbon
dioxide
released by every individual in four different countries over the
period
of 40 years. It is clearly seen that, throughout the
period
the United Kingdom was the highest amongst the other four nations in releasing CO2 and it is
also
notable that there was a drastic decrease in Sweden’s CO2 emission, whilst the other two regions kept growing in leaking CO2 till the
year
2007.
To begin
with, in the
year
1967 England outflowed nearly 11 metric
tonnes
of
carbon
dioxide
into the air, after remaining steady for a decade it started dropping and reached close to 9 metric
tonnes
by the end of the
period
.
On the other hand
, Sweden was at approximately 9 metric
tonnes
in the
year
1967 and reached its peak by nearing 11 metric
tonnes
but
then
we can see a drastic dip from the
year
1977 till the rest of the
period
,
at the end
Sweden was identically matching with Portugal.
Furthermore
, the two countries which were lower compared to others in 1967 were Portugal just above 1 metric tonne and Italy around 4 metric
tonnes
, despite being lowest in the beginning, both the countries kept growing in releasing
carbon
dioxide
and
at the end
of the era Italy was second highest with nearly 8 metric
tonnes
in the amount of leaking CO2 and Portugal was as same as Sweden at just above 5 metric
tonnes
of
carbon
dioxide
in the air.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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