The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The line graph illustrates on average
carbon
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dioxide
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released by every individual in four different countries over the
period
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of 40 years. It is clearly seen that, throughout the
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the United Kingdom was the highest amongst the other four nations in releasing CO2 and it is
also
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notable that there was a drastic decrease in Sweden’s CO2 emission, whilst the other two regions kept growing in leaking CO2 till the
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2007.
To begin
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with, in the
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1967 England outflowed nearly 11 metric
tonnes
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of
carbon
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dioxide
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into the air, after remaining steady for a decade it started dropping and reached close to 9 metric
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by the end of the
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.
On the other hand
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, Sweden was at approximately 9 metric
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in the
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1967 and reached its peak by nearing 11 metric
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but
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we can see a drastic dip from the
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1977 till the rest of the
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,
at the end
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Sweden was identically matching with Portugal.
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, the two countries which were lower compared to others in 1967 were Portugal just above 1 metric tonne and Italy around 4 metric
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, despite being lowest in the beginning, both the countries kept growing in releasing
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dioxide
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and
at the end
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of the era Italy was second highest with nearly 8 metric
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in the amount of leaking CO2 and Portugal was as same as Sweden at just above 5 metric
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of
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dioxide
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in the air.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, period, co, year, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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