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The bar chart below gives information about average annual seafood consumption in Asian countries between 2002 and 2010.

The bar chart below gives information about average annual seafood consumption in Asian countries between 2002 and 2010.
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The bar chart illustrates the total amount of seafood
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consumption
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 in five different Asian
countries
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 from 2002 to 2010.
Overall
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,
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 the figure showed that Japan
was
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 the highest amount of seafood
consumption
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, it experienced a downward trend over the past 8 years.
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, other
countries
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 experienced an upward trend, with Myanmar
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the most significant change.
To begin
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 with, in 2002, Japan, which
the
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 highest total
consumption
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 in all years, dwindled gradually from about 65
kg
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 to 50
kg
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 between 2002 and 2010.
However
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, Myanmar's
consumption
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 grew drastically from approximately 20
kg
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 to 50
kg
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, which reached the same value as Japan
at the end
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 of the period given.
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, the other three remaining
countries
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, which were Cambodia, The Philippines, Vietnam, and China, witnessed a slight increase in three
concecutive
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consecutive
 years. In 2002, the value of the remaining
countries
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 except
vietnam
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Vietnam
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 stood above 20
kg
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. By 2010, they had grown gradually and reached the same value, which was below 40
kg
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, countries, kg with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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