The bar chart below gives information about average annual seafood consumption in Asian countries between 2002 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the total amount of seafood
consumption
in five different Asian Replace the word
consumed
countries
from 2002 to 2010. Overall
, Although
the figure showed that Japan was
the highest amount of seafood Verb problem
had
consumption
, it experienced a downward trend over the past 8 years.
In contrast
, other countries
experienced an upward trend, with Myanmar was
the most significant change. Unnecessary verb
apply
To begin
with, in 2002, Japan, which the
highest total Add a missing verb
had the
consumption
in all years, dwindled gradually from about 65 kg
to 50 kg
between 2002 and 2010. However
, Myanmar's consumption
grew drastically from approximately 20 kg
to 50 kg
, which reached the same value as Japan at the end
of the period given.
On the other hand
, the other three remaining countries
, which were Cambodia, The Philippines, Vietnam, and China, witnessed a slight increase in three concecutive
years. In 2002, the value of the remaining Correct your spelling
consecutive
countries
except vietnam
stood above 20 Change the capitalization
Vietnam
kg
. By 2010, they had grown gradually and reached the same value, which was below 40 kg
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