You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to provide some accurate
information
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for your
article
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in an international travel magazine. I believe my past experiences make me an expert on the location, and I want to emphasize that you can give incorrect
information
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about
Kadıköy
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that you mentioned in your
article
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.
Kadıköy
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is home to unique mosques and historical places and it is well known as the place where the first mosque was ever built, but given examples in your
article
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are totally wrong. You mentioned
Kadıköy
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as the third selected destination for tourists.
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,
this
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information
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is incorrect
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government statistics. If you verify your data using the Turkish database, I can provide the exact figures.
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misinformation could lead to various issues, causing many family businesses to lose money.
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of the
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, many tourists might think that there is nothing to see in
Kadıköy
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and may not want to visit. I strongly suggest writing a new
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to correct
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information
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. We are talking about at least 10.000 shops and restaurants.
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I await your positive feedback, I would be grateful if you could reply to my email at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to hearing from you. If you have any questions or thoughts, please do not hesitate to contact me. Kind regards, Salih Zeki Köni
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Task Achievement
Task achievement: During your correction of the information, provide specific examples of inaccuracies and consider offering detailed correct facts to strengthen your argument.
Task Achievement
Task achievement: It would be more effective if you provided a suggestion for what the magazine should do about the wrong information in a more actionable way.
Coherence and Cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: There is some logical progression, but the ideas could be arranged in a more orderly manner, ensuring each paragraph has a clear central topic.
Coherence and Cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Use a wider range of cohesive devices and topic sentences to establish clear links between your ideas.
Coherence and Cohesion
Greetings and closing: The closing is somewhat appropriate but try to use greetings and closing statements that more closely follow conventional letter formats.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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