The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.

The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.
The table
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the number of secondary school teachers’ salaries in five
countries
by the year 2009.
Overall
,
while
teacher
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teachers
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in
Luxembourg
were the most well-paid,
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teachers
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in Australia were the lowest-paid.
In addition
, the
amont
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amount
of time it took for a
teacher
in Denmark to earn the maximum
salary
was much
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faster
than most other
countries
.
Secoundary
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Secondary
school teachers in
Luxembourg
the starting
salary
was 80,000, higher than the figure for
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in Denmark at 47,000.
Whereas
,
other
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in other
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countries
, the starting
salary
for an inexperienced stood at around 30,000. The average
salary
per year displayed a similar pattern with
Luxembourg
by far the highest at 112,000 and other
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grouped tightly around 50,000. In
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of maximum salaries,
Luxembourg
is
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the highest at 139,000 though in
this
category Korea was second highest at 84,5000, followed by other
countries
with approximately 45,000 to 65,000.
However
,
teachers
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in
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and Denmark the time
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to earn the top
salary
took less than 10 years, Meanwhile, in Japan, Korea and
Luxembourg
had to wait longer at 37, 34, and 30 years respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual salary
  • gross income
  • net income
  • cost of living
  • purchasing power parity (PPP)
  • economic indicators
  • wage disparity
  • median wage
  • livable wage
  • compensation package
  • inflation rate
  • educational funding
  • professional development
  • currency exchange rates
  • teacher retention
  • standard of living
  • qualifications
  • experience level
  • tenure
  • collective bargaining
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