The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.
The table
illustrate
the number of secondary school teachers’ salaries in five Change the verb form
illustrates
countries
by the year 2009.
Overall
, while
teacher
in Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
Luxembourg
were the most well-paid, teacher
in Australia were the lowest-paid. Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
In addition
, the amont
of time it took for a Correct your spelling
amount
teacher
in Denmark to earn the maximum salary
was much fater
than most other Correct your spelling
faster
countries
.
Secoundary
school teachers in Correct your spelling
Secondary
Luxembourg
the starting salary
was 80,000, higher than the figure for teacher
in Denmark at 47,000. Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
Whereas
, other
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in other
countries
, the starting salary
for an inexperienced stood at around 30,000. The average salary
per year displayed a similar pattern with Luxembourg
by far the highest at 112,000 and other nation
grouped tightly around 50,000.
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nations
term
of maximum salaries, Fix the agreement mistake
terms
Luxembourg
is agian
the highest at 139,000 though in Correct your spelling
again
this
category Korea was second highest at 84,5000, followed by other countries
with approximately 45,000 to 65,000. However
, teachers
in Change preposition
for teachers
Australian
and Denmark the time Correct your spelling
Australia
require
to earn the top Change the form of the verb
required
salary
took less than 10 years, Meanwhile, in Japan, Korea and Luxembourg
had to wait longer at 37, 34, and 30 years respectively.Submitted by mynonames on
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