The pie chart illustrates the pivotal ground that negatively affects the productivity of agricultural land while the table shows information about the proportion of land degradation due to those effects categorized in three separate areas of the world within the 1990s period.
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The pie chart depicts the major causes
on
why agricultural Change preposition
of
land
can be less productive than ever before, while
the table illustrates how those factors affected three different regions across the planet in 1990s
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the 1990s
Overall
, over-grazing is the biggest problem that can lead to less productive land
for generating agricultural products compared with other issues, like deforestation and over-cultivation. Moreover
, the most impacted region due to
land
degradation during 1990s
was Europe where all of the causes played important roles.
For more detailed information, based on the chart, the proportion of degraded Change the article
the 1990s
land
due to
over-grazing is 35%. Furthermore
, deforestation and over-cultivation also
have significant contributions to the less productive agricultural lands. The former accounts 30
% and the latter is 28%.
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In addition
to that, the percentage of North America was only 5% which was the smallest proportion compared with other regions provided in the table. Oceania had the largest over-grazing problem where it could contribute up to 11.3%.Submitted by ravialdyhidayat on
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