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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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both maps display
university
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the university
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 sports layout before and after it was developed for university students. In 1990, it had only two physical exercise fields, swimming and
tennis
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. over the period, the
court
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 was completely transformed with the addition of a basketball
court
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 ,
indoor
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an indoor
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 swimming area and a bigger changing room.
in contrast
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 , the café appears to have been left undeveloped. The most noticeable audition is the
tennis
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court
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 on the left side of the map
that
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which
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 used to be a car park in 1990.
however
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, the car park has been reconstructed
to
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into
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 a field for
tennis
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. Now the park has been built
to
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into
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 a basketball
court
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. apart from that an outdoor pool became an indoor swimming area that
makes
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gives
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 people
get
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apply
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a
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apply
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protection from the sun. Near the
pool
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pool,
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 there is a fitness center that
was
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has
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 a
tennis
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 area. Next to the gym, a changing room has been extended to have more capacity for pupils. In the middle of these buildings,
cafe
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the cafe
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 and reception saw no change, those
stay
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stayed
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at
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in
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 the same spot as before.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tennis, court with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Layout alterations
  • Refurbished
  • Demolished
  • Erected
  • Renovated
  • Sports facilities
  • Tennis courts
  • Basketball courts
  • Football fields
  • Athletics track
  • Encroachment
  • Accessibility
  • Landscaping
  • Infrastructure
  • Spatial arrangement
  • Ample space
  • Congested
  • Upgrade
  • Downgrade
  • Amenity
  • Displacement
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