In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
There have been
people
suggesting that all the vehicles that run on the roads such
as cars
or buses will no longer have human drivers and instead
, the vehicles will automated by AI. Although
this
situation has some drawbacks, the potential of a reduced proportion of traffic accidents
outweighs any potential disadvantages.
First of all, with the technological advancements today we have reached, there are lots of machines run by AI. In the future
, it is assumed that cars
, buses or trucks will be driverless
. However
, we ,as humanity, still don’t trust them enough because of a lack of knowledge and we might feel unsafe with driverless
cars
in the future
. Studies show that, when people
ask to
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while
they decide, they immediately ask for another human to be sure. And for its
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reasons
, surveys indicate that Fix the agreement mistake
reason
people
don’t rely on its decision-making mechanism more than their friends since they cannot be sure how they managed it. Thus
, in the future
, people
may feel frustrated when using cars
run by
their own. Indeed, they don’t use them at all so the aim of Change preposition
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driverless
cars
would fail.
However
, the possibility of reduced traffic accidents
, in my opinion, outweighs any potential disadvantage. For instance
, if you are driving after a sleepless long night, the possibility of an accident is 68% because of lack of attention.There are lots of proofs indicating that machines run by AI, cause fewer errors compared with human beings. They are much more efficient and accurate while
doing tasks. Thus
, if the vehicles no longer have human drivers, it means fewer accidents
happening.
In conclusion, there are some benefits and drawbacks if we would have driverless
cars
in the future
. I strongly believe that the potential of no accidents
happening outweighs any potential disadvantage.Submitted by asik.melliss on
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